Please review my new song

Please review my new song that I just posted. Constructive criticism is always welcome; however, please no swearing, rude or nasty comments - there really is no need for that. I'm just asking for a review.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=24k2SQaXcp8

Thank.




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