Plot Assesment and Feedback (Burbank)

Please reply via email: Please let me know what plot you like the best. Please give a letter grade for each plot by how much you like the idea.

1. A mother takes her daughter to an abortion clinic and has her daughter abort the baby. The "almost father" wishes the mother dead and the mother soon commits suicide by drug overdose from greif.
2. Time itself makes two lovers fall apart. Nothing but simple time and wondering eyes.
3. There is a fire and a guy saves a woman from a fire in the desert and leads her back to the safety of home .
4. The two are without water, and they have to venture around the desert seeking water.
5. A creature kills the leading lady, and the leading man attacks the creature and dies as well in a passion of love.
6. When two people get to mars they find they are able fly and they do not age.
7. The two lovers go horseback riding with guns and have to shoot a man who tries to steal their horses and water.
8. A grandfather enables a mother named Kelly to continue using drugs. Yet the boyfriend Brad of the daughter Jade declares Kelly is on drugs, and he tries to convience the rest of the family to stop Kelly the mother from doing drugs. However, the mother Kelly dies from an overdose. Brad and Jade break up because of her mother's death.
9. A story of a man with lots of body language trying to help a girl who lives with her abusive parents to come with him to far away place.
10. Global warming causes selected astronaughts to colonate on mars. The two lovers are almost killed as they are about to take off to mars because of a gealous earthbound onlooker.
11. Two lovers are far away from each other, and they write poems back and forth to each other. He sends her money to help her get out from living in her car. He has to fight his thoughts that she is cheating on him. He sends money back to her. He can only hope she will see him when he backs to her a whole year later.


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